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alette ([personal profile] alette) wrote in [community profile] 3sentencefic2016-03-17 08:19 pm

Three Sentence Ficathon 2016!

(Because one didn't seem to have started this year, and I admit to wanting very much to participate in one of these challenges!)
Presenting the Three Sentence Ficathon 2016!

The Steps:
1. Prompt the fandom/pairing/situation of your heart, preferably in the following format: fandom, character/pairing, prompt word/sentence. .
2. Find a prompt by someone else (or heck, your own) that catches your interest.
3. Fill the prompt in no more than three sentences. (NB: This is really more of a guideline
4. Revel in reading the (hopefully large) amounts of fics thereby produced.
5. PROFIT!
shallowness: Kira in civvies looking straight ahead (Natasha Avengers intensity)

Fill: Perspective, AoS, Jemma Simmons, spoilers for 3.05

[personal profile] shallowness 2016-03-25 08:11 am (UTC)(link)
“I’m so thirsty,” someone complains in the lab, and Jemma wants to be snide and snap ‘No, you’re not,’ because it can’t be that long since they guzzled something down and there are water coolers, coffee machines and fridges aplenty around. Thirsty is wandering for days on a desert planet that’s a cruel blue when you’d always associated the colour with water, and you don’t know if any liquid that you’ll find will be safe to drink, but you do know that if you find anything, you would drink it with mouth gaping wide, even if it was a figment of your desperate imagination, rather than dry out as you’re slowly doing.

Jemma takes a deep breath, and reminds herself of where she is, the bright lights of the lab and the mechanical noises of the lab grounding her, whereas a few weeks ago, it was all too much; and she says quite loudly, “I’m going to make some tea if anyone fancies some.”


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Re: Fill: Perspective, AoS, Jemma Simmons, spoilers for 3.05

[personal profile] seal_nonnie 2016-03-25 05:30 pm (UTC)(link)
I love this! I like the way you contrast Jemma's past and present; your writing's really true to her character.
shallowness: Kira in civvies looking straight ahead (Natasha Avengers intensity)

Re: Fill: Perspective, AoS, Jemma Simmons, spoilers for 3.05

[personal profile] shallowness 2016-03-27 03:48 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you. I'm glad the characterisation worked for you.
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Re: Fill: Perspective, AoS, Jemma Simmons, spoilers for 3.05

[personal profile] meridian_rose 2016-04-07 01:51 pm (UTC)(link)
A nice moment that acknowledges what Jemma went through and her efforts to readjust :)
shallowness: Kira in civvies looking straight ahead (Natasha Avengers intensity)

Re: Fill: Perspective, AoS, Jemma Simmons, spoilers for 3.05

[personal profile] shallowness 2016-04-11 06:46 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you very much for the feedback.